The song is okay...
You had a great base melody but you did nothing with it. There were so many spot where you could have evolved the song but you kept it the some. This causes it to be very repetitive. Next time, try elaborating on the melody and not the background music.
Great Song
I checked out the original. This is much better.
However, you shouldn't have done the skipping at the beginning, it should have just held the note. Great job!
the skipping makes a good intro tho
Awesome
Great, just Great!
Pretty Good
The sound quality isn't the greatest but I like the tune.
Wow
You seem to be the perfect audio artist on newgrounds because no matter what song I hear and like, it seems to be done by you. Keep it up.
thats really nice :D awesome, thanks!
!!!
Wow, That went right into the beat!
It's Okay
it's an okay song... It changes beat/tempo in an unusual way at about 0:08. Also you may want to change the main instument so it is more pleasing to the ear.
But overall its a good song.
Yeah It does need improvement
Mabey at some point ill try
Wow
If you made a full version of this, it would be the perfect song.
This is the only song I know of that I would give a 20/10.(If I could...)
Thank you very much! The full version will be released soon!
YES!!
I love the song and especially why you wrote it.
it's okay...
I found some of the loops didn't fit together very well and the styles of the loops are just too different to be put together.
kewl
thnxs for ur review,
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